I will rise like black clouds
Thundering in rage for revenge
Burn the faces of those
Who marred my beauty
Shattered my innocence
Every time I remember ‘his’ face
Revolting disgust fills me up
Disguised in the robe of
A saintly tutor
His reality is entrapped
In my fist
He was the one I proudly trusted
My existence can’t withstand
The stings of his touch
Sets me on fire
The fire has ignited
Now
Fearless and vicious
Augmenting to demolish
Not to spare one in lineage
Blazes from the pits of hell
To cast the shadow of hell
Impassively without guilt
Scorch of unquenched thirst
Will be satiated by
Sweet taste of revenge
I am the dance of death
Call me fiend for all I care
Epitome of hate
Who has turned me so?
very nice and awsome poem
Thanks Himani 🙂
Just an amaze…
Thanks, buddy !!
Good one…….. emotion expressed well… i liked it
Thank you 🙂
Good Work done. Great Poem. Love it.
Thank you so very much, Sir !!
awesome work pragya…keep going… 🙂
Thanks a ton, Jalaj 🙂
hats off to you girl ………..!! loved it 🙂
Thanks sweetie 🙂
awesome
More than Thank you ^_^
Good one…..awesome lines
well written!
awesome weaving of words
Pragya, you have once again placed me “in” the scene of experience! How fascinating that you have the gift of drawing people “into” your literary setting. I love being one of the characters in the places you have been.
realy awesome…: ))
wooow nice one
Superb one Pragya…
Nice one re.. 😀 Keep it up.. 🙂
Very powerful. And written with great eloquence and balance.
beautifully written
Powerful!
Good one!!!!!
kya baat…..kya baat…..kya baat ! excellent !!
A good poem indeed
superb…….heart-touching !!
Dear pragya, nice piece of poetic excellence…great work..looking forward to many more from you.
shandaar….badhai…
superb poem!
Nice one.
Beautiful poem, Pragya Very well written.
Like this poem.. Best wishes,
well done pragya…beautifully written,keep it up
very nice poem
Impressive.. Liked it..:)
Courageous writing, with a very powerful undertone. And some nice imagery.
hey sorry for the late comments .. couldn’t access through cell …
As usual nice work … proud of you having as my friend … 🙂
amazing & energizing…
All the best Pragya! Quite a power-packed poem!-
nice 1 dear…..really deep…..
Well done Pragya…………..
I had already read&appriciated in presence. my best wishesh are always with U P’gya keep it Up
All d best….. 🙂
Well said Pragya. U r the best as always.
awesome work. 🙂
nice flow of thoughts.
impressive piece.
well done pragya……………… best of luck
Excellently expressed profound emotions….. !!!!!…..Beautiful Poem….loved it…!!!!!
very well done
awesome pragya…. if not today, u will make it one or the other day surely…. keep up the good work…..
A sweet poetry from a sweet girl from dewas. As your words flow, it touched my heart and I feel the sense of rejuvenation. Well Done Pragya.. keep going, keep writing.. ur expressions are very good
Good Job… It’s a really nice poem
I feel the rage…..it made me angry
I love it. It’s very deep and touching. 🙂
Go Pragya! All the way~ ^^
Emily
Powerful stuff! Thanks for sharing that.
great pragya. its really admirable…………
awesome……may u win d game….all d bst….
Terrific – Terrific – Terrific 🙂
good job as always…
gud poem…..pragya….!!
🙂
Great work 🙂 keep writing 🙂