I will rise like black clouds
Thundering in rage for revenge
Burn the faces of those
Who marred my beauty
Shattered my innocence
Every time I remember ‘his’ face
Revolting disgust fills me up
Disguised in the robe of
A saintly tutor
His reality is entrapped
In my fist
He was the one I proudly trusted
My existence can’t withstand
The stings of his touch
Sets me on fire
The fire has ignited
Now
Fearless and vicious
Augmenting to demolish
Not to spare one in lineage
Blazes from the pits of hell
To cast the shadow of hell
Impassively without guilt
Scorch of unquenched thirst
Will be satiated by
Sweet taste of revenge
I am the dance of death
Call me fiend for all I care
Epitome of hate
Who has turned me so?
Great work 🙂 keep writing 🙂
gud poem…..pragya….!!
🙂
good job as always…
Terrific – Terrific – Terrific 🙂
awesome……may u win d game….all d bst….
great pragya. its really admirable…………
Powerful stuff! Thanks for sharing that.
Go Pragya! All the way~ ^^
Emily
I love it. It’s very deep and touching. 🙂
I feel the rage…..it made me angry
Good Job… It’s a really nice poem
A sweet poetry from a sweet girl from dewas. As your words flow, it touched my heart and I feel the sense of rejuvenation. Well Done Pragya.. keep going, keep writing.. ur expressions are very good
awesome pragya…. if not today, u will make it one or the other day surely…. keep up the good work…..
very well done
Excellently expressed profound emotions….. !!!!!…..Beautiful Poem….loved it…!!!!!
well done pragya……………… best of luck
awesome work. 🙂
nice flow of thoughts.
impressive piece.
Well said Pragya. U r the best as always.
All d best….. 🙂
I had already read&appriciated in presence. my best wishesh are always with U P’gya keep it Up
Well done Pragya…………..
nice 1 dear…..really deep…..
All the best Pragya! Quite a power-packed poem!-
amazing & energizing…
hey sorry for the late comments .. couldn’t access through cell …
As usual nice work … proud of you having as my friend … 🙂
Courageous writing, with a very powerful undertone. And some nice imagery.
Impressive.. Liked it..:)
very nice poem
well done pragya…beautifully written,keep it up
Like this poem.. Best wishes,
Beautiful poem, Pragya Very well written.
Nice one.
superb poem!
shandaar….badhai…
Dear pragya, nice piece of poetic excellence…great work..looking forward to many more from you.
superb…….heart-touching !!
A good poem indeed
kya baat…..kya baat…..kya baat ! excellent !!
Good one!!!!!
Powerful!
beautifully written
Very powerful. And written with great eloquence and balance.
Nice one re.. 😀 Keep it up.. 🙂
Superb one Pragya…
wooow nice one
realy awesome…: ))
Pragya, you have once again placed me “in” the scene of experience! How fascinating that you have the gift of drawing people “into” your literary setting. I love being one of the characters in the places you have been.
awesome weaving of words
well written!
Good one…..awesome lines
awesome
More than Thank you ^_^
hats off to you girl ………..!! loved it 🙂
Thanks sweetie 🙂
awesome work pragya…keep going… 🙂
Thanks a ton, Jalaj 🙂
Good Work done. Great Poem. Love it.
Thank you so very much, Sir !!
Good one…….. emotion expressed well… i liked it
Thank you 🙂
Just an amaze…
Thanks, buddy !!
very nice and awsome poem
Thanks Himani 🙂