A rendezvous with you,
Took me to another milieu
From the rains to the beautiful terrain
Where I could see the rainbow,
Vivid and colourful,
Just like you, my lovely maiden!
Underneath the laughing hues
In the meadow,
We both sat
And so did time,
When you told me
You could never be mine.
My heart stopped beating for a while
And through my reeling head
A thought passed by:
Even though your heart is away,
If my love is true
It will come by my way;
Even though you love him with grace,
My heart will always be there
For you to embrace.
wow
can just relate it to myself!!!very well written..hats off.
soulful…!!
very well written..!! keep going..:)
pleasant presentation of feelings. good one…
a simple and colurfull presentation…. form a nice nd deep image… weel done 🙂
this is nice,the way you maintained the simplicity yet touched the quintessence chords
I like the subtle undertone of the colours of the rainbow which follows the readers till the second stanza…simple and heartfelt. 🙂
simple yet wonderful…